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From 1994 - not formattted as written but.... [Jan. 18th, 2004|05:29 pm]
Bob Bain
bees are buzzing trees are growing
birds are humming farmers sowing
wings a' flapping crows a' crowing,
hikers thumbing... nature pianissimo.

paths are winding
grassy binding
endings finding..

.. the sleepy hidden bungalow.

a rusty hammer In the country
red tinged glamour a silence crisper,
lying greenly and peace of mind
not uncleanly as breezes whisper
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[User Picture]From: elsibeth
2004-01-19 05:50 am (UTC)
Your poem makes me long for summer. It's winter here, as of course you know, and extremely cold and icy outside.
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[User Picture]From: bobbain
2004-01-19 06:26 am (UTC)
Strangely this item (poem/verse/whatever) was formatted with one section in the top left hand corner, another in the top right, a section in the middle and another two sections at the bottom left and the bottom right.

They have merged but the "feeling" I was attempting to convey is still there (for me at least).

The verse did much to alleviate stress back in 1994 and describes a picture that hangs on my wall and which I look at from time to time.

It still conveys peace and tranquility whenever I view the picture or read the verse.

I also have a picture of a fat (smiling) cat midst some roses.
I like that as well.
It brings back memories...


If you look closely you can possibly separate the sections which have merged.


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[User Picture]From: bobbain
2004-01-19 06:40 am (UTC)
I have "reformatted" this "verse" as best I can but it was pictorial in nature in addition to being "poetic".

See "as reformatted".

Unfortunately Live Journal formatting means I cannot reproduce the formatting of some items I wrote in 1994 and I lose some essence of that which I attempt to convey...
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[User Picture]From: bobbain
2004-01-19 06:35 am (UTC)

as originally formatted....

bees are buzzing
birds are humming
wings a' flapping
hikers thumbing...

trees are growing
farmers sowing
crows a' crowing
nature pianissimo.

paths are winding
grassy binding
endings finding..

.. the sleepy hidden bungalow.

a rusty hammer
red tinged glamour
lying greenly
not uncleanly

In the country
a silence crisper
and peace of mind
as breezes whisper




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